free verse... ugh

ok, so these r my free verse poems i had to write for class. i hate free verse, but whatever

title: a day with a glass of life

dawn of life embraces me
filling me up
like a glass of water

noon is a far away place
the day will be half full
half empty

the life will be half full
half empty

the glass as well

then afternoon
its almost full
retirement

dusk of doom
it reaches the top
the end is near

night falls
the glass over flows
life is over




Title: Drama

Drama is like a thanksgiving dinner
the first part is good
but the end is best
the first course is small;
receiving your scripts
it starts to get bigger
with practice and blocking
then the turkey;
like dress rehearsal.
finally dessert, sweet and delicious
the performance
for everyone to see
in the end you fell such satisfaction
your filled to the brim
drama is like a thanks giving dinner;
the best is at the end.


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ugh, hate those poems, and i have to write one more free verse tonight! will have it up soon!