heres another free verse. our main focus was personification
its called "Love's a Dictator"
Love embraces me
but i refuse to hug back
he comes at me full on
but i push him
away who needs him?
after what he's done
giving me an apology i cannot accept
though still, anger looks through him
unable to attack
as bad as love was
anger lets him be
because anger cant beat love
everyone knows
that love conquers all
yup, love is the dictator here.
Monday, June 9, 2008
free verse... ugh
ok, so these r my free verse poems i had to write for class. i hate free verse, but whatever
title: a day with a glass of life
dawn of life embraces me
filling me up
like a glass of water
noon is a far away place
the day will be half full
half empty
the life will be half full
half empty
the glass as well
then afternoon
its almost full
retirement
dusk of doom
it reaches the top
the end is near
night falls
the glass over flows
life is over
Title: Drama
Drama is like a thanksgiving dinner
the first part is good
but the end is best
the first course is small;
receiving your scripts
it starts to get bigger
with practice and blocking
then the turkey;
like dress rehearsal.
finally dessert, sweet and delicious
the performance
for everyone to see
in the end you fell such satisfaction
your filled to the brim
drama is like a thanks giving dinner;
the best is at the end.
__________________________________
ugh, hate those poems, and i have to write one more free verse tonight! will have it up soon!
title: a day with a glass of life
dawn of life embraces me
filling me up
like a glass of water
noon is a far away place
the day will be half full
half empty
the life will be half full
half empty
the glass as well
then afternoon
its almost full
retirement
dusk of doom
it reaches the top
the end is near
night falls
the glass over flows
life is over
Title: Drama
Drama is like a thanksgiving dinner
the first part is good
but the end is best
the first course is small;
receiving your scripts
it starts to get bigger
with practice and blocking
then the turkey;
like dress rehearsal.
finally dessert, sweet and delicious
the performance
for everyone to see
in the end you fell such satisfaction
your filled to the brim
drama is like a thanks giving dinner;
the best is at the end.
__________________________________
ugh, hate those poems, and i have to write one more free verse tonight! will have it up soon!
Limericks Galore :D
today we had discussion group up at Mr. Vanest's, and i ended up staying for dinner, cuz Mr Vanest and I were having a wonderful time making up limericks. we wrote tons and tons, but here are our best ones:
There once was a man from tirana
whose hand was removed by a piranha
he screamed and he cried
and he almost died
and had it replaced by a banana
(this one is only Mr Vanests, but i put it n e way)
There was a guy who was me
who couldn't write a limerick to save his life
There once was a farmer from spain
who couldn't remember his name
he asked his best horse
who told him of course
but then he forgot it again
there once was a chicken from hell
who cast a ridiculous spell
he made all the blokes
into artichokes
and all of the women as well
there once was a colorful shoe
that was worn by a lady called sue
put over a sock
it went for a walk
and stepped in some fresh camel poo
there once was a girl with black hair
that sprouted up from everywhere
she needed it cut
but not on her butt
because she wanted it there
there once was a pan of hot water
that fred jacobs poured over his daughter
it went in her ear
and came out her rear
and when it came out it was hotter
there once was a man doing dishes
and in his hot water were fishes
they swam all about
and tried to get out
which was actually one of their wishes
There once was a man from tirana
whose hand was removed by a piranha
he screamed and he cried
and he almost died
and had it replaced by a banana
(this one is only Mr Vanests, but i put it n e way)
There was a guy who was me
who couldn't write a limerick to save his life
There once was a farmer from spain
who couldn't remember his name
he asked his best horse
who told him of course
but then he forgot it again
there once was a chicken from hell
who cast a ridiculous spell
he made all the blokes
into artichokes
and all of the women as well
there once was a colorful shoe
that was worn by a lady called sue
put over a sock
it went for a walk
and stepped in some fresh camel poo
there once was a girl with black hair
that sprouted up from everywhere
she needed it cut
but not on her butt
because she wanted it there
there once was a pan of hot water
that fred jacobs poured over his daughter
it went in her ear
and came out her rear
and when it came out it was hotter
there once was a man doing dishes
and in his hot water were fishes
they swam all about
and tried to get out
which was actually one of their wishes
Wednesday, June 4, 2008
Limericks
There once was a man named Fred
Who lived all his life in a bed
He never got up
Not even to sup
And one day awoke to be dead
A man once knocked on a door
it opened to show a fat whore
he ran far away
but she caught him that day
and wrestled him down to the floor
There once was an ugly old witch
who married a son of a bitch
they hated each other
so she married his brother
who was so uncannily rich
Who lived all his life in a bed
He never got up
Not even to sup
And one day awoke to be dead
A man once knocked on a door
it opened to show a fat whore
he ran far away
but she caught him that day
and wrestled him down to the floor
There once was an ugly old witch
who married a son of a bitch
they hated each other
so she married his brother
who was so uncannily rich
Haikus
Sorry. I had to write Haikus for Class:
Buzzyful Thingy
Buzzyful thingy
Looks at me attackishly
So I run away
Flutterby
The butterfly sits
Then flutters eccentricly
As if it were scared
Buzzyful Thingy
Buzzyful thingy
Looks at me attackishly
So I run away
Flutterby
The butterfly sits
Then flutters eccentricly
As if it were scared
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